Radio Advert Script

First Uploaded film - Feedback

Fantastic production. I like how it makes the audience feel that they are "inside the character's mind" , you really felt as if you were there. Good effects with the lighting too. 
- Oliver Mitchell

I think the dark bits after you were hit - are great!
but very well filmed and shot
love the lighting
some of the sound levels moving from that filing sequence to the next need to be checked...
too harsh,...
the restaurant scene - the back ground sound is too much at the start...
(it is for me anyway)
no credits on the end titles of - 1) music!!! and 2) locations etc,..
Also dosent say - who Abbie is
also who the other actors are
third title is not on for long enough cant read it
you havent said what Adie and grace did..
credit is needed ! 
- Sue Whitehead

Like the background music throughout, it adds tension and good effect 
- Grace Oliver

There wasn't that much I could say to improve tbh, seemed a bit quiet on my pc maybe but stuff like lighting was good 
- Dan Emsley

First Uploaded film

Radio Trailer

Group final poster

In the group poster we added the certificate to the poster image which is not visible in the other posters, this was a design flaw which we corrected in the group work.

Poster Idea - Tom Whitehead